Six in the morning. I don't think i'll have a neutral view about this story. it describes the action of a man who's made mistakes returning to his home. what Scott Woods did was combine his voice within the story, he made the description seem real even though it was just a persona. the way he pronounced his word with care for the character he is portraying. using slang that is appropriate for his urban character and how it stays in that character view point, even when other characters are talking because it is the character explaining what the other characters are saying.
this poem was about who i assume a man mid twenties to early thirties. and hm seeing his grandma, even though he thinks every one in his family has shunned him because of his criminal past. the appropriateness of voice i could not tell if it was his own voice or a character voice he had created. this is a smoothness that i want to achieve in my preformed so that when i preform it feels as if i'm an telling a story of my life.
the character show an in deph look into the fictional characters life with the supporting speeches that lead up to the climax of the poem. that is something i found different than the other page meets stage i can interpret the rise ad fall of the action. it one of them that have a story that follow this curve. and use of the atomispshere and tone of voice that shows the hard exterior of his persona and the soft emotion that this person in feeling and how hard he's trying to be strong
he uses focus point thought the audience and doesn't say cemented in one position and let it smoothly flow though the story. the way he describes this just draws interest into the story unlike some of the other Page meet stage that lack emotion and were just spoken plain not tearing away at the listeners Psyche.
his tone was low and hushed in pitch but he didn't allow louder portion of the interaction to make him loss that hushed claiming effect even when the mood was anger because it meant to make the Lister pity him and the tone keep that aspect at a constant. when he speaks with his grandmother he doesn't change his voice to imitate her, i think this is 1 of 2 reason 1 he does not have a convincing grand ma voice or 2 he understands that the best way he can preform this piece is to maintain that one character and go though his thoughts of him realizing what it is his grandmother is telling him.
it keep its poetic aspec to it it may not of rhymed but it mantain a pattern with one word that appeared more than most "Smooth" and that describes the feel of this poem.and the phrases like ''cancers bullets....a hand made out of old newspaper...nurses lies for eyes...her pillow is the heaviest thing i ever held in my hands...and i keep that key in my pocket in case i ever come home." this was the only story i written about for this assignment that brought out emotions in me that why i know I'm best in the way i mention it not only because it topic that i find relate able but because it is a style much like my own that I've been using since 7th grade for dramatic monologues
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