story telling analysis, Dynamic duo

The Dynamic Duo.......
they dynamic duo is a slam poetry duet. that have apparent extensive back ground in super Mario brothers 1. what they did with the stage was very unique on how they over came a slow start and built up momentum for there later poems which captivated the audience. their awareness of presence in most of their later poetry. that the lacked in the beginning poem where it was just an awkward turtle of an ice breaker. by this statement i mean that they lacked the power to truly bring in the audience or the viewer into the realm of Super Mario Bros.

 they had a keen use of projection for the entire auditorium when they went on and off of the stage and had to let their voices carry. you could easily Tell the years of practice that has went into the act and the pinpoint accuracy or there tangent speech. you could hear the distinction between their projection and when they used the microphones.

  one thing that it felt like it lack was in depth characters to poetry there past story's that built up a barrier. on believing it happened or if they were just performing an act instead of living the act. i  sadly did not enjoy the event as much as i would have wanted. it seemed as if i forced my self into laughing at some of there more humorous works that tome fell upon deaf ears since most of the relevance did not relate to general experiences nor told a message.the first poem was out of all the worst it was lacking the presence that was built up into the following acts. which showed improvement when there was a message behind what they were saying

 so it was to me a situation where they went and performed the same routine and it to at least me lacked in its purpose of entertaining do to it's distant connections to ancient information and jokes, and the verbalized threat toward a mythical unicorn was one way in which it seemed to distance the stories from the audience's view. and a focus point on super Mario bros 1 a game that arrive almost 30 years ago and hold s less and less relevance to today's society, and it showed how much audience is related to your interpretation. and for interaction you have to work with what you are or aren't given.

Thing that i learned to focus on are maintain appropriate volume try to bring the viewer into the world of the story as fast as i can and keep them there. stay relaxed when things don't feel right or if i make an error.thing i will focus on not doing that i saw are leaving character because audience's reaction, and don't tell people things that aren't interesting in the slightest  and keep things either contemporary ,classical or universally relevant stories